Saturday, October 19, 2013

DIARY OF AN OKADA RIDER

 A CLOSE SHAVE.
(CONTINUATION)
 Jaji swallowed painfully. In his mind's eye he saw his painful end  -a sharp knife slicing through flesh and bone,the wriggling of his helpless frail body and the final gasp of breathe. A tear rolled down one cheek.
"Crying won't help you son." the bald headed priest smiled lopsidedly.
"..w-what will?" Jaji whispered. Each passing second was pure agony. So he was going to die? Just like that? He nearly choked.
The priest eyed him thoughtfully and said,"Do you have your bible with you?"
 Jaji's forehead furrowed in confusion. Bible? For Christ sake he'd just been kidnapped on his way from Mama Jimoh's,how could he have held a bible on a Friday night? But wisdom nudged at him to be silent.
"You anger me!" the priest cried and punched him hard on the face.
A startled Jaji screamed and fell back on the floor. The priest gave that crooked smile again and produced a bible from underneath his red garment. "You should be with your bible at all times." He eyed Jaji for a moment and began to flip through the pages of the battered bible. "The wages of sin is death." he read aloud. Jaji could hear his own heart beat so audibly in the semi dark room. His face tingled. Jeez,Jeez.. so this was how men earmarked for ritual killing felt before they were slaughtered? This was worse than death itself! He watched the priest do the sign of the cross and place the bible gingerly on a table. His eyes were getting accustomed to the dark now. He noticed a rugged vertical mark run down one gaunt cheek,and shivered uncontrollably. The priest looked anything but human,an eerie creature in the dark.
" i'll have Bosco bring in food for you. You'll eat and stay strong for me." He said,then moved slowly to the door. " No escape for you son." were his parting remark. The door was firmly bolted from outside. Jaji quickly scanned the dimly lit room,no Window seemed to be visible,the ceiling was high so that even if he'd thought to climb ,hope was squashed now. He began to chew at his lower lip,the growing feeling of trepidation washed over him.
 Bosco turned out to be a giant that reminded him of Goliath in the bible. The huge man came in a few minutes later holding a tray of food. Wordlessly he placed the tray on the table without so much as sparing a glance at him. He left the room afterwards. Out of curiosity Jaji uncovered the dish and peeked. He couldn't make out if the brown lump was a piece of yam or if the brown,stale liquid was soup! He turned his head away,heart sinking deeper with each passing moment.
 He must have fallen asleep for he was jabbed into consciousness by the giant. He quickly got to his feet. Bosco held him by the collar and pulled him out and preceded him through a tiny passage that led to the backyard - a bushy expanse of land that reeked of decomposing human flesh. Jaji turned to the giant,and the priest,and now there was another man  standing close to the priest. May be he was the executioner. Uncontrollable tears began to roll down his cheeks. "Please... " he squeaked. A certain strange feeling of impending death settled in the pit of his stomach. "Please sir,let me go.." He trailed off when he saw the shinning dagger in the Giant's hand. Oh dear....his limbs buckled.
 "Hold on." came the still voice of the third man. "Don't I know you?"
 "Yes you do! " Jaji hurriedly put in,scrambling to his feet. Was this the tiny flicker of hope people often spoke about? He held the man by the hem of his flowing robe and wouldn't let go.
"Get it over and done with! Now!" the priest commanded the giant ,who was obviously awaiting a more superior order from the man.
"You are the Okada rider who returned my money when it fell from my pocket,aren't you?I told you about the white man's job too."
 Jaji instantly remembered him. "Yes sir! Yes sir I remember you!"  That particular afternoon's incident flashed in his mind. The kind gesture. The appreciation. The job offer. The slightly crazy lebanese. Everything.
 "Don't kill me please.." Jaji's teary eyes looked up at him.
Then it happened so fast :The priest drew out a knife from a sheath strapped to his leg side and lunged towards the man. He plunged the sharp knife right into his arm. " Kill him!" the priest bellowed at the giant. "Kill him" came the soft command of the man. The giant chose to obey the man who recruited him and shoved the dagger into the priest's chest,and dragged till vital organs ripped out. Blood oozed from the convulsing body of the dying priest. "It is well with my soul.." he muttered under his breathe.
"Master,you're hurt." The giant said to the man, but he was more concerned about the Okada rider. "Now take your leave. Bosco,see him to the highway where he can get a cab -"
"No sir,i can find my way!" Jaji interjected. The giant still looked mean.
"Hahahaha," the man laughed," Bosco will do as I say. He won't hurt you."
 Jaji thanked him profusely as Bosco led him away. All through the narrow walk to the highway Bosco kept mute. He only said "goodbye" when a cab came and Jaji got seated on the passenger side.
 "Oga wetin? Na so so hmmmmm hmmmm u dey do since,i beg mek I hear word!" the driver rebuked as he sighed an umpteenth time.
"You will never know..." Jaji inwardly thought. He took a deep breathe. He was glad to be alive.







































17 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:09 am

    Wow,it was his act of good dat saved him and God was wit him,wat nxt?

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  2. Anonymous10:34 am

    At a point I feared for Jaji until I remembered its his DIARY

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  3. Anonymous10:40 am

    The priest must be raving mad! Meme,honestly I commend your sense of humour.You killed it in this diary.Nice one gal.

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  4. Anonymous10:42 am

    Yet to read something better.

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  5. Meme i'm not happy with you.Of all names to use,you opted for Bosco,,it is well!

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  6. Anonymous10:49 am

    Bosco the giant,is that you?????????????????????Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  7. Anonymous12:12 pm

    Meme I never knew you were a fantastic writer.More power to your elbow luv.

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  8. Anonymous12:15 pm

    Meme your imaginative prowess is enthralling.lovely writeup.Keep it up dear.
    #Bernard#

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  9. Anonymous12:31 pm

    I have read better scripts from Meme, this one is too Nollywood-like. Pls let's see some of those real stuffs especially with romantic touch. Nice one dear.

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  10. Anonymous12:37 pm

    I think so too@Anon12:31

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  11. Anonymous12:38 pm

    I think so too@Anon12:31

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  12. Anonymous1:00 pm

    Meme de meme!!! Beautiful piece.so Wats up 4 today's diary?

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  13. Narrow escape for Jaji, it's good to do good, well! Actor no dey die for film, Jaji is a mario, I hope to read more from his diary

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  14. Anonymous5:16 pm

    Very nice write up meme. Can't wait till you start publishing. Great stuff. Keep up the good work.

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  15. Anonymous7:25 pm

    "He couldn't make out if the brown lump was a piece of yam or if the brown,stale liquid was soup!" LOL

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  16. Anonymous9:33 pm

    Lesson learnt:one good turn deserves another

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  17. olumese adesuwa10:08 pm

    Merme hummmm my word of advice "is GOOD to be GOOD"see how he was saved so do GOOD always*wink*

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