Friday, March 14, 2014

SWEETEST STING (Short fiction story PART 2)

Hana had a close friend named Pelemoh who happened to be classmates with her. At 19,Pelemoh already had six relationships with men,having lost her virginity at the tender age of 14. Whenever Hana shunned the advances of men she would wag her head in plain unbelief and pity.She never imagined,for the life of her,how Hana could deny herself the thrills of dating a man and the pleasures of consummating the relationship. It beat her that her friend was so naive,and annoyingly so!
"Virgin Mary! " she would taunt her endlessly,watching Hana squirm in discomfort. Somehow,Hana's naivety humoured her. "Pelemoh,please let me be o. I'm not complaining..."she whined when Pelemoh became unbearable.
" -do you think you're still a baby??huh,do you? Oh please! " Pelemoh would interject,a trifle annoyingly.
 One day,a sunny tuesday afternoon precisely,Hana was returning home from school in the company of two of her classmates when a navy blue high lander jeep pulled up right beside her. "Hello pretty girl..Where are you heading to?" came the deep voice of the stranger from within. "Me?" one of the girls queried,batting her eyelid and unconsciously jutting her rear. Oh,she was pretty,knew it and didn't waste precious time to display her rather striking features. Everyone in their class knew Mena was worldly. Everyone knew she dated more than one guy. In fact who wouldn't,when she so ceaselessly rapped about Jide,Mascott and Ibrahim to all? She was one person who held on to the strong belief that variety kinda spiced things up. Or did it?
"Hello sir.." she mouthed,lowering her eyelids now. She gestured at the other girls to keep moving.
"Not you dear,I'm referring to..Her!" The stranger smiled lopsidedly,pointing at Hana. Hana's eyes rounded in shock,and then terror. Before one could mouth,"Meme" she pivoted on her heels and fled. Pelemoh and Mena broke into laughter. The stranger in the jeep joined too. And then suddenly Mena seemed to remember that she had only a few seconds ago been rejected by the stranger. She stopped laughing and turned a hostile face at him.
"What are you still waiting for? Virgin Mary has taken to her heels! Screech on,go find her..that's if her reverend dad doesn't teach you a lesson you wouldn't forget in a hurry!" she threw at him maliciously.
"Oh yeah? I don't mind being taught a lesson by her dad since she's worth it. But you,I mind being taught one.." He wound up and stepped on the ignition. He indeed screeched away after that retort.
Pelemoh hid a small,mischievous smile,secretly glad Mena had been turned down by the stranger. Sometimes it infuriated her that she always did think herself to be the prettiest,the sexiest of them all. Not like she was facially pretty anyway..pffffttt..she wasn't! Okay, Fine,she had well rounded breasts,a tiny waist,large hips and rotund backside(Well,may be this meant pretty to the guys!)but that was all to Mena.
"Is that a smile on your face Pelemoh??" Her voice broke into her thoughts. Jeez,she hadn't been aware she had the smile plastered on her face.
"Smile? Oh no."
"You better not!" she bit out angrily, increasing her pace as she continued her walk home.
Pelemoh sneered behind her and shrugged,the smile deepening now as she diverted to the pathway leading to her house.
To be continued.
Watch out for "sweetest Sting,part 3 coming up tomorrow.
Written by Osarhieme Okungbowa.

*Hey guys,did you enjoy the story? Hope you did. #hugesmile# Lemme get to read what you think,k?
Kisses N Hugs..
Meme.





















7 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:08 pm

    NYC read n d 'meme'was catchy.I dey wait 4 d rest o.fluffy

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  2. Bishop Ray King11:25 pm

    I was already soaked in d story, Mena had self-confidence, or is it over-confidence, some of we guys like them gitting them young, innocent, and naïve, Hana took to her heels, Pelemoh was a real bad gurl too like Mena, dating multiple guys at a time

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  3. teleme7:34 am

    Beautiful,interesting,hilarious.meme,plz continue o

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  4. Anonymous7:36 am

    I gbadun your stories

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  5. Anonymous8:19 am

    What next..?Till anoda 2months shey?

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  6. Anonymous8:04 pm

    Help me ask ơo anonymous 8:19....nice story anyway@meme

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  7. Hauwa Malik6:13 pm

    Meme plz complete this story nah

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